. The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
It is opined that the most effective approach to raising the growth of juveniles is to make parents take parenting courses. I strongly agree with
this
statement.
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To begin
with, several abused children or violent cases have been reported affecting children not only physically but Linking Words
also
mentally. Without support in time,the consequence of a harsh situation can cause a rift in a child's personality forever. Linking Words
For example
, the victim tends to commit illegal activities despite living in a positive environment later. Linking Words
Moreover
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according to
evidence that has been recorded in court, several people who abuse adolescent do not aware of the sub-sequence of action they have done. Linking Words
This
is a responsibility of not only the education sector but Linking Words
also
the government. Linking Words
For example
, the un-updated courses learned by students will reproduce another tragic event.
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this
problem, the government must issue a policy to increase the punishment of the crime harshly regardless of age or gender to threaten the terrorist. Linking Words
For instance
, the more severe action they commit, the more serious punishment they will receive. Linking Words
In addition
, the education administration needs to increase the knowledge of raising the youth to reduce crime rates and encourage the best future of them because they are the next pillar in society. Linking Words
For instance
, the wisdom encouraging the young's growth rate can be imparted by hard methods Linking Words
such
as taking an ethics course or soft ways Linking Words
such
as through series or tales.
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To conclude
, in my opinion,the approach to mitigate the crime events and rise the benefit of adolescents can be cultivated by a structured approach Linking Words
such
as taking courses or punishing hugely.Linking Words
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