Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

day and age, issues related to the well-being of human beings have always been the top concern of residents around the world.

Thus

, it is debatable whether methods to solve

health

problems

should be the primary issue or the side issue in scientific research. From my perspective, scientists should focus on finding ways which help humanity improve

health

problems

.

This

essay will elaborate on my belief. Perhaps for many,

health

issues are not as urgent as

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others.

First,

nowadays, weather

problems

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the most alarming issue in the world. In fact, the weather is getting more severe

due to

several

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hunting practices of the human-beings. Turkiye nation is a perfect example, recently, the local residents in

this

place suddenly encountered earthquakes, which leads to serious influences on human life.

Second,

many individuals claim that the natural

resources

problem is needed to clearly study

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several projects. In reality, humanity

are

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facing the risk of natural

resources

being depleted in the upcoming years

such

as mineral.

This

can be seen in Vietnam, some mineral

resources

are at an alarming rate, which poses a threat

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construction

material

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also

become scarce. Despite these aforementioned

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merits of the other

problems

, I still believe that scientific research plays a crucial role in addressing global

health

. One is that lethal diseases are rapidly

increrasing

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increasing

in human life. In fact, nowadays, citizens always face with epidemics

such

as petechial fever, covid-19, which are unprecedented

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, so scientists are required to conduct research about

health

challanges

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challenges

to allow civilians

address

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them easily.

An

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justification is that the

health

problems

of

human-beings effect

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on

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the development of the economy of the nation.

This

can be seen in 2020

,

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when covid-19 pandemic

outbreaked

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outbreak

outbreaks

,

a

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significant number of cities

in

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the globe were locked down, which causes the economic development of the countries to be

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, even severe decline. Vietnam is a perfect example, residents encountered a drastic economic recession in their daily life

such

as the salaries of staff

were

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cut, and several domestic products

became

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redundant as they were unable to be exported. In conclusion, it is disputable that the urgency of weather and natural

resources

problems

needs the contribution of scientific experimentation.

Nonetheless

, I still agree with the first standpoint because of its positive on the well-being of civilians.