n the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
people
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argue that it will be unnecessary to purchase any printed newspaper or book as the advanced technology will enable
people
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to read whatever they like online free of charge. I partly agree with
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view. Online reading will provide good opportunities for
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to read whenever and whatever they like.
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, online reading allows
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to take full advantage of fragmented time. Take me for an example. As a
book worm
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, I can utilize the mobile phone to read novels and classics when I have free time, even merely five minutes. And just clicking the headline of the news will
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the latest news.
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, the popularization of electronic
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, especially
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, lays a physical foundation for
people
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to read online.
As a result
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, printed newspapers and books are redundant for
people
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.
However
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, the old who know little of the Internet will prefer to substitute newspapers on a daily basis and buy some printed books.
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,
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of knowledge relevant to online reading makes it difficult for them to enjoy reading as
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as the young.
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, suffering from eyesight problems, old
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are reluctant to be exposed to
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strong screen light, which is a stress
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their eyes.
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, printed newspapers and books are the optimal choice for the old to read. Generally speaking, in the future, online reading will become increasingly convenient
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most
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will rely on the Internet to read, but some old
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will insist to purchase printed ones
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poor command of online reading and worry about eyesight deterioration. I believe that not all
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people
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will abandon paper publications.
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