The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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The given bar chart gives data about the different modes of transport used to travel and from work in

one

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European

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city in 1960,1980 and 2000.There are four different modes of

transports

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they

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are

bus

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car

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bike

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and foot. Looking at the graph as a whole,in 1960 the

bigest

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proportion

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of used

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and the lowest

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of used

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car

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cars

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.In 1980 the

higest

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highest

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of used

bus

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the lowest

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of used

food

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.In 2000 the

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of used

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car

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cars

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the

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lowest

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of used

food

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. In detail, about 17% of people in

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one

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European

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used

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bus

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a bus

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,just over 5% used

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,25% used

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bike

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almost

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number 35% used

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.In 1980,slightly about 25% used

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bus

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buses

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,approximately 23% used

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car

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cars

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,20% used

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bike

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bikes

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nearly

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number 35% used

food

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.In 2000,just over 15% used

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bus

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a bus

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,slightly about 35% used

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car

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a car

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rougly

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roughly

6% used

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bike

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around

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9% used

food

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.About 35% of people in

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one

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European

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used

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car

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a car

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is the

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in all

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

166 words

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The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?