The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The given bar chart gives data about the different modes of transport used to travel and from work in
one
European
city in 1960,1980 and 2000.There are four different modes of transports
.Fix the agreement mistake
transport
they
are Correct your spelling
They
bus
,car
,bike
and foot.
Looking at the graph as a whole,in 1960 the bigest
Change the word
biggest
proportion
of used food
and the lowest proportion
of used car
.In 1980 the Fix the agreement mistake
cars
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
proportion
of used bus
the lowest proportion
of used food
.In 2000 the higest
Correct your spelling
highest
proportion
of used car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
the
lowest Add a missing verb
was the
proportion
of used food
.
In detail, about 17% of people in one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
European
used bus
,just over 5% used Correct article usage
a bus
car
,25% used Correct article usage
a car
bike
,Correct article usage
a bike
almost
number 35% used Correct word choice
and almost
food
.In 1980,slightly about 25% used bus
,approximately 23% used Fix the agreement mistake
buses
car
,20% used Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bike
,Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
nearly
number 35% used Correct word choice
and nearly
food
.In 2000,just over 15% used bus
,slightly about 35% used Correct article usage
a bus
car
, Correct article usage
a car
rougly
6% used Correct your spelling
roughly
bike
,Correct article usage
a bike
around
9% used Correct word choice
and around
food
.About 35% of people in one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
European
used car
is the Correct article usage
a car
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
proportion
than
in all Change preposition
apply
category
.Fix the agreement mistake
categories
Also
,around 5% of people in one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
European
used car
is the lowest Correct article usage
a car
proportion
than
in all Change preposition
apply
category
.Fix the agreement mistake
categories
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