The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data on the proportion of different households in one northern country between 1984 and 2020.
It is clear that
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the percentage of families with dependent kids was the most widely-spread one,
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however
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the
number
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of these households decreased significantly during the given time period (from more than half to approximately one-third). The next most populated group consists of couples without children, the
number
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of
such
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people increased marginally from roughly one-fifth to one-fourth of the total from 1984 to 2020. Probing
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, the proportion of Canadians without couples and lone parents were quite similar and accounted for 6 and 4 per
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respectively in the first year,
also
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the figures grew up slightly to 11 and 10 per
cent
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in 2004 and reach a peak
at the end
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of the period (12 per
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both). The
number
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of families with independent kids decreased by 2 per
cent
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during the given time period.
Overall
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, the
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of couples with dependent and independent children dipped from 1984 to 2020,
while
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the
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of individuals, families without children and lone parents increased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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