Nowadays in many
people
are following the
fashion
hairstyles or
clothes
fashion
because they do not like the oldest
fashion
hairstyles or
clothes
fashion
.
This
essay will discuss
about Remove the preposition
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fashion
On the one hand,
majorityCorrect article usage
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peopleChange preposition
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want to go with
fashion
and they really
loveAdd the particle
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followWrong verb form
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fashion
and they usually get a haircut in
fashion
and
this
action
veryAdd a missing verb
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good for
him Correct pronoun usage
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.
Such
as they
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therefore
like
followFix the infinitive
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news about
fashion
. Now many
people
dress up in
fashion
forAdd the comma(s)
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example, they wear sneakers with sportswear and
with shoes
..Replace the punctuation
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So dress up almost all
people
in the world. It was positive
sidesFix the agreement mistake
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.
On the other hand
,
fashionReplace the word
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clothes
notAdd a missing verb
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nice to wear and
thisChange the determiner
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fashionable
clothes
look unusual for other
people
who do not know about
fashion
this
is very difficult
explainFix the infinitive
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to
people
. They can think about you
badChange the word
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. They think
in Change preposition
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the world has many different
clothes
for
dressesWrong verb form
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up. Many teenagers get a haircut in
fashionCorrect article usage
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their parents will not allow it.
For instance
, teenagers will trim
theChange the word
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hair on the sides. It was negative
side
and
this
essay believes that
this
is a negative trend for
people
.
In conclusion
inAdd the comma(s)
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my opinion,
people
must dress up in
fashion
but they should not exaggerate
this
action. I listed above has a positive
side
and
negativeCorrect article usage
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side
.
People
must follow
fashion
and negative
side
they should not exaggerate
this
action