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Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that
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scientific
 research should be devoted to addressing global
health
issues
, but there are some who contend that there are more
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pressing
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 problems to focus on.
This
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this
 argument and why I partially agree with the
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 opinion.
To begin
 with, some argue it is important that adequate attention is given to solving global
health
issues
. Currently, there are many people who are finding it difficult to afford medicine to be protected from diseases. To address
this
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scientist
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 could strive to devise new and more affordable
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alternatives
 so that these people can live healthily in
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.
This
 is evident with the
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Hepatitis
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 its invention medication for treatment was
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presented
, more people were administered the vaccine and the inspection rate had decreased by a considerable margin.
However
, others argue that there are other
issues
 that are more
deservvving
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deserving
 of attention from
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. One of them is global famine, as there are some regions that are suffering from crop shortages
due to
 numerous factors
such
 as poor soil quality and pests.
Therefore
,
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scientists
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 genetically-modified crops that could withstand harsh conditions. Another critical issue is global warming, as it could pose a higher threat than most
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plants
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 global
health
.
Hence
, scientific research could be valuable in finding the causes of it as
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 as solutions to curb the effort of it. In conclusion, I agree that
while
 it is important that scientific research should be dedicated to solving global
health
 problems, there are more critical
issues
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 to be addressed
such
 as reducing famine and mitigating global warming.
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