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what is global warming crises? a global warming solution.

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In the
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 several decades, climatic changes have become a global problem. Which risks exactly a global warming bring for civilization? What steps could be put in place to reduce
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 impacts? In
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 essay, these effects and their ways of solving them will be researched.
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, the main destructive effect of global warming is a rise in temperature and it is
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 the existence of different industries in developed countries. Every modern industry needs a lot of energy and burning fossil fuels like coal, oil, and gas to generate electricity emit carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Excessive carbon dioxide emission makes a greenhouse effect.
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, for the
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 100 years average temperature on the earth increased by 1,5 degrees of Celsius.
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, it speeds glaciers melting
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 a rise in sea level.
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 could lead to flooding and the disappearance of part of the land.
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, despite the ecological dangers, there are solutions. First of all, it must be encouraged to use renewable sources of energy
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 as wind, solar or geothermal energy.
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, Iceland fully integrated its nature
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 into people's lives and now gets heat and electricity from geothermal sources, and doesn’t produce additional CO2 emissions.
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, society should develop and use public transport, more than their private cars, because it will help reduce CO2 emissions into the atmosphere. To summarize, extreme climatic changes are a worldwide problem and could result in emergencies,
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, governments and individuals have a role to play in decreasing influences on the environment.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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