In many countries, the amount of rubbish produced is increasing, what do you think are the causes of this, and what can be done to solve the problem?
A huge quantity of waste produced is growing in a
lot
of countries. I think unnecessary product buying and ordering Use synonyms
food
from outside are the main issues. Running an awareness campaign can fix Use synonyms
this
problem.
Nowadays, Linking Words
people
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of unnecessary products just for fashion. Most of the products contain a Use synonyms
lot
of packaging and tags with it. Those unnecessary packaging go to the waste bin as rubbish. Use synonyms
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, for busy life Linking Words
people
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, a Linking Words
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of plastic bags, boxes and other stuff come with it. Use synonyms
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then
a box will go to a paper bag, Linking Words
also
spoons and napkins come with it. If that Linking Words
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then
all unnecessary staff can be avoided.
An awareness program can solve Linking Words
this
problem. When Linking Words
people
know that because of a Use synonyms
lot
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then
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people
will try to avoid generating extra waste. Use synonyms
For example
, in Canada, the government announced that if anyone needs a paper bag Linking Words
then
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As a result
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people
are using reusable bags for their daily use. Use synonyms
This
is why rubbish production reduced significantly.
In conclusion, unnecessary products buying with extra packaging and ordering Linking Words
food
using apps create an extra amount of wastage. Use synonyms
This
extra amount of wastage is growing in many countries in the world. An awareness program can solve Linking Words
this
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Coherence and Cohesion
Although your essay has a clear structure, ensure every paragraph flows smoothly to maintain coherence. Consider using more linking phrases to connect ideas within the paragraphs for better cohesion.
Task Response
Expand on your ideas for a more comprehensive response. Providing more perspectives, such as cultural or economic factors, might enrich your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are clear and provide an effective framework for the essay.
Task Response
The examples provided, such as the use of the UBER app, add relevance and specificity to your argument about waste production.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite