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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? *Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.*

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In the
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vehicles
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 that are derived under their control. In my point of view, it is a promising future and the benefits of
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vehicles
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 can far outweigh their drawbacks. In the present essay, the financial and safety benefits of
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 new technology
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 to its drawbacks will be discussed to illustrate the majority of advantages.
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, a growing body of research illustrates that using artificial intelligence could be an outstanding platform to decrease expenses and
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 decline traveller's expenses.
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, the elimination of some expenses
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 as driver's wages and insurance
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 of replacing
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 with
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 cars directly affects the costs.
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,
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 has been shown artificial intelligence-based
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 are even more reliable than human being
drivers
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.
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, the rate of accidents in self-driving
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 is meaningfully lower than in human-driving automobiles.
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 results need to be more investigated, the early achievements insist that travelling with
driverless
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 cars is safer.
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, there are some drawbacks in front of
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 new technology. One of them is the number of
drivers
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 who lose their job.
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, there are at least 10000 taxi
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 in Melbourne who lose their jobs which unfortunately is an inevitable consequence of any developments in new technologies. To summarize, there are disadvantages to
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 cars
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 the advantages far outweigh them. these new generation of
vehicles
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 are promising a future where travel is much cheaper and
moreover
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 considerably safer.

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