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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? *Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.*

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In the
last
 few years, machine learning and artificial intelligence attracted a lot of interest and now there are
driverless
vehicles
 that are derived under their control. In my point of view, it is a promising future and the benefits of
driverless
vehicles
 can far outweigh their drawbacks. In the present essay, the financial and safety benefits of
this
 new technology
in contrast
 to its drawbacks will be discussed to illustrate the majority of advantages.
To begin
, a growing body of research illustrates that using artificial intelligence could be an outstanding platform to decrease expenses and
therefore
 decline traveller's expenses.
For instance
, the elimination of some expenses
such
 as driver's wages and insurance
as a result
 of replacing
drivers
 with
driverless
 cars directly affects the costs.
Above all
,
lastly
 has been shown artificial intelligence-based
drivers
 are even more reliable than human being
drivers
.
For example
, the rate of accidents in self-driving
vehicles
 is meaningfully lower than in human-driving automobiles.
Although
 results need to be more investigated, the early achievements insist that travelling with
driverless
 cars is safer.
However
, there are some drawbacks in front of
this
 new technology. One of them is the number of
drivers
 who lose their job.
For instance
, there are at least 10000 taxi
drivers
 in Melbourne who lose their jobs which unfortunately is an inevitable consequence of any developments in new technologies. To summarize, there are disadvantages to
driverless
 cars
on the other hand
 the advantages far outweigh them. these new generation of
vehicles
 are promising a future where travel is much cheaper and
moreover
 considerably safer.
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