Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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lot
of specialist
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specialists
studied
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to study
at
another Change preposition
in
country
because in
their Change preposition
apply
country
did not develop some proffessions
. Personally, I prefer Correct your spelling
professions
studing
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studying
abrod
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abroad
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information
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about
country
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my Correct pronoun usage
it in
country
.
I wont
to give some arguments for Correct your spelling
want
this
topic. First of all
we are Add a comma
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develop
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country
. When we take something new we are always discuss
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are always discussing
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with another
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other
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are also developing
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have
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has
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does have
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have good
a new knowledge
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new knowledge
a piece of new knowledge
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, peoples
training abroad have a Fix the agreement mistake
people
lot
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this person
these people
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call his phone and book the time.
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want
country
for free. I suppose,
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apply
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apply
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maybe
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do have
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students
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people
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bad
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of
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it
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apply
country
where he/she Correct article usage
the country
born
. Others Add a missing verb
was born
country
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also have
also
have any
problems.
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apply
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decide
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the poor
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