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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noisefrom your house/flat. write a letter to your neighbours. in your letter - Explain the reason for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take

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Dear Neighbours, I hope you are doing well. I just received your complaint about the disturbance we created on the weekend. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience. My friends and I met after 5 years. we were so excited they dropped the bomb on me as they just crashed in without informing me.
Otherwise
, I could have done something. It was hard to control everyone's emotions.
However
, I want to apologise for the disturbance we made.
Also
, I will make sure that you don't have to go through any like that in the future. As you know,
this
 was the first time, I bothered you in the
last
 10 years. I want to make it up to you. I have seen your love towards flowers
while
 gardening. Please accept these flowers from my side. Your friend, Bhavi
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suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter, as this is an official apology to your neighbours.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity and coherence.
logical structure
Use appropriate punctuation and complete sentences to enhance the logical structure and readability of your letter.
complete response
The letter clearly addresses all parts of the task: explaining the reason for the noise, apologising, and describing the action you will take.
greeting and closing
The closing is warm and friendly, which helps in maintaining a positive relationship with your neighbours.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is generally apologetic and considerate, which is suitable for the purpose of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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