Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that youth should serve
society
for free in their leisure time as this
has advantages for building teens
' personalities and helps reduce the pressure on the community
. I strongly support this
idea and the following essay will explain why I hold this
opinion.
Young people have obligations toward their community
. One of the ways that boyhood can reward society
is to work
for free in jobs that help to improve society
. In other words
, the community
gives the teens
many privileges such
as sports centres, parks, and free public transportation tickets. As a way to return the favour to the community
, teenagers should work
for jobs without being paid. for example
, to help reduce the pressure on the city workers every morning teens
can help school kids by crossing the street, thus
reducing the number of paid workers.
Furthermore
, youth can also
benefit from unpaid work
by developing their personality and building self-confidence. When young people start to work
at the youngest age they learn how to be independent and self-resilience. In addition
, working for the community
will improve the relationship between the teens
and the society
, as a result
, they will respect and value every service provided to them. For example
, teens
who work
in the municipal sector, for instance
working for a library find to highly value the public library services they enjoy and they will care more about the facilities they use than others.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that teenagers should participate in free jobs in their free time to express admiration for their community
services and to help develop their personality.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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