Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large of

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poor

countries

is suitable.

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, other

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solution, they deem developed

countries

can help developing

countries

by

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other types than financial aid. In my thinking, I agree with the second

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to help poor

countries

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other types

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Firstly

, the best way to help a country which

realize

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the poor is

provide

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to the

people

in

this

country

a

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better quality education.

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, almost developed

countries

in the world all have advanced education. The students in these

countries

can find and learn just about the newest knowledge from other

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. They have many science projects on different topics

such

as

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environment

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, wars, spaces and health.

Besides

, they do these projects with help from teachers,

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or experts and they research in labs with a large of modern equipment to serve your plans. The results of them can be tested, so if it is effective,

it

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can be applied to

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life.

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rich

countries

can help poor

countries

to learn and have modern and new technology rather than giving money. When poor

countries

have modern technology,

people

in these

countries

can increase

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productivity and produce more goods, so they will earn more money to pay for their life.

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, the productivity of agriculture is higher when they use

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machine

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in to

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production process.

Additionally

, the percentage of

people

having problems in their life will reduce because they can give many better services of health and

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. In conclusion, giving money to poor

countries

is not the way which

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them in the short time, and providing good education and new technology will take to poor

countries

in

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long time.