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more and more countries have a problem with plastic waste. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

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Today there are plenty of incidents that are connected with
plastic
waste
, for ,instance animals
such
 as birds and fish that inhabit nearby beaches suffer from plastics made items
due to
 consuming them
along with
 the food
as a result
 it hurts their stomach. The solution to
this
 problem is to encourage society to pick up the
waste
 after their stay. One of the main causes of unrenewable items is that they can pollute our ecology badly.
This
 can cause many problems in the near future, for ,example today there are numerous
plastic
 bottles in the ocean and they can make water polluted. So when someone will drink
this
 water they can get sick or even die because of intoxication.   The government should control
plastic
waste
 in future by signing laws that will control
waste
. ,
Furthermore
 authorities need to benefit recycling companies, so they will increase recycling in upcoming years.
This
 can be witnessed by Germany, which has the highest rate of recycling globally, where more than half of its wastes have been recycled and manufactured.
Accordingly
, in a final analysis, oceans' marine life and soil have borne the brunt of the pollution because of
plastic
 refuse, and state involvement is a panacea for
this
 problem.   In conclusion, there are numerous amount of bad things that can happen
due to
plastic
waste
 like animal deaths or humans catching diseases after drinking polluted water. But there are ways to solve these problems like benefiting recycling companies or training our community to clean up beaches after leisure time
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