The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
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The table indicates the changes in the
number
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of travellers visiting various areas around the world in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there is an increasing trend over the recorded period.
While
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Europe was the most popular area, people did not tend to visit the Middle East. The total
number
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of visitors increased significantly reaching 693.7
million
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in 2005, compared to 448.9
million
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in 1990. Precisely, a majority of visitors chose Europe as the destination, accounting for 400.2
million
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in 2005,
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the
number
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of visitors travelling to Europe was 280.2
million
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in 1990.
Although
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there were only 9.8
million
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people who went to the Middle East in 1990, it
also
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increased to 15.8
million
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in 2005.
However
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, the
number
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of travellers to America decreased to 113.2
million
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in 2005 after it reached a peak in 2000, with a value of 118.2
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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