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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this

In many nations around the world, more and more individuals are becoming interested in searching out the
history
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 of their
houses
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 or buildings.
This
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 essay will examine the possible reasons behind it and how individuals can research it.
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 with, the main possible cause is
people
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 are curious creatures. They would like to search
some
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for some
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 things that they don't know about and get satisfied by revealing
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them
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.
As
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 it comes to their
houses
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 or
their
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 buildings they live in, they get more curious and want to know the
history
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 behind it.
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, another reason may
also
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 vary depending on their beliefs. They may try to figure it out if there is a situation that conflicts with their beliefs.
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, a very religious man in Australia heard a
rumor
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 that his house used to be a cemetery, and
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digged
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 his own house about 20 meters to find it out.
While
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people
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 try to find out the
history
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 behind their
houses
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, they can use the
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information
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 provided
from
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by
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 the government. Most of the governments around the world keep documentation of settlements to see if there is an illegal activity. These documents may even date back centuries.
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this
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 information,
people
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 who would like to know the
history
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 of their
houses
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 may find out what they are looking for.
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, in Germany, a woman named Clauira Clarke found out that her house was a shelter in
world war
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World War
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 two, by searching out the official government documents.
To conclude
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, the reasons why
people
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 are interested in finding
about
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out about
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 the
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 of their
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 are
the
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humanbeings
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human beings
 are curious creatures and they may have beliefs. They can find out the backstory behind their
houses
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 by using official and reliable documents.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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