the way that people work today has changed significantly due to the development of technonlgy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these changes?

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innovations, it brought a curial transformation to the working mode. It is a common belief that the changes have negative impacts on workplaces.

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, there is a more persuasive argument that telework will become dominant in the future. On the one hand, technology blurs distance restrictions. It is even harder to distinguish between office

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and private

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. With the invention of computers and smartphones. Clients would ask employees to deal with the problems immediately encroaching the individual

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, most offices launched the work from home regulations during the pandemic

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. Some employees complained that they have to always stand by in front of the computer and jobs became responsibility can’t get overtime pay.

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, their boss even didn’t trust them and thought of them taking the rest of the work.

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, remote working indeed saves lots of

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on the daily commute and

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decreases the

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contagious.

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the advanced web and internet systems, connecting telework has become more convenient and common. People can complete their jobs in any physicals locations.

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, some offices inspired by telework extended into global companies because there is no bondage by space limited.

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working mode company doesn’t have to pay for renting the office, water, and electricity fees saving considerable expenditure. In conclusion, advances in technology turned not limited to location restrictions,

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convenience may disturb people’s private off-work

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. It’s undeniable

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situation accompanies by huge advantages to transform the future working mode.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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the way that people work today has changed significantly due to the development of technonlgy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these changes?

Your opinion

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In the past employees worked for small businesses but now many are working for large businesses. What are the advantages and dis advantages of this trend ?

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