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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The graph illustrates the number of Caribbean Islands tourists, who stayed on cruise ships and on the island from 2010 to 2017. the
line
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 of
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships is shown a slight escalation in seven
years
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. it has started with 0.25
million
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visitors
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 in 2010 and reached 2
million
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 in 2017
although
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 between 2010 and 2012 the
line
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 is shown a gentle raise and
also
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 a decrease.
besides
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, the
line
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 of people who stay on the island is constant at 0.75
million
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 tourists in the first year,
then
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 it illustrates a stable grow up from 0.75
million
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visitors
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 to 1.5 in two
years
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 and it is shown a constant number for two
years
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. between 2015 to 2017 the
line
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 graph is shown a slight decrease and a gentle
increase
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. the total
line
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 illustrates a significant grow up from 1 tourist to 2.75 of them between 2010 to 2015. After ,that it shows a stable number for one year and again a sharp
increase
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 from 2.75
million
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 tourists to 3.
overall
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while
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 the
line
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 of
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships and islands is shown a gentle
increase
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, the total
line
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 illustrates a sharp
increase
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 in seven
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, visitors, years, million, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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