the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph illustrates the number of Caribbean Islands tourists, who stayed on cruise ships and on the island from 2010 to 2017.
the
line
of visitors
staying on cruise ships is shown a slight escalation in seven years
. it has started with 0.25 million
visitors
in 2010 and reached 2 million
in 2017 although
between 2010 and 2012 the line
is shown a gentle raise and also
a decrease.
besides
, the line
of people who stay on the island is constant at 0.75 million
tourists in the first year, then
it illustrates a stable grow up from 0.75 million
visitors
to 1.5 in two years
and it is shown a constant number for two years
. between 2015 to 2017 the line
graph is shown a slight decrease and a gentle increase
. the total line
illustrates a significant grow up from 1 tourist to 2.75 of them between 2010 to 2015. After ,that it shows a stable number for one year and again a sharp increase
from 2.75 million
tourists to 3.
overall
while
the line
of visitors
staying on cruise ships and islands is shown a gentle increase
, the total line
illustrates a sharp increase
in seven years
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