the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph illustrates the number of Caribbean Islands tourists, who stayed on cruise ships and on the island from 2010 to 2017. the
line
of
visitors
staying on cruise ships is shown a slight escalation in seven
years
. it has started with 0.25
million
visitors
in 2010 and reached 2
million
in 2017
although
between 2010 and 2012 the
line
is shown a gentle raise and
also
a decrease.
besides
, the
line
of people who stay on the island is constant at 0.75
million
tourists in the first year,
then
it illustrates a stable grow up from 0.75
million
visitors
to 1.5 in two
years
and it is shown a constant number for two
years
. between 2015 to 2017 the
line
graph is shown a slight decrease and a gentle
increase
. the total
line
illustrates a significant grow up from 1 tourist to 2.75 of them between 2010 to 2015. After ,that it shows a stable number for one year and again a sharp
increase
from 2.75
million
tourists to 3.
overall
while
the
line
of
visitors
staying on cruise ships and islands is shown a gentle
increase
, the total
line
illustrates a sharp
increase
in seven
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, visitors, years, million, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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