Many people belive that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. what are these problems and how could they be reduced ?
It is true that most films have
scenes
having violent scenes
.While
some problems as
broken psycho can be noticed,I Correct quantifier usage
such as
also
assert that some solutions ranging from severe control before watching the film can be used.
Scenes
with extra cruelty lead to some problems.First and foremost,after watching something violent,the social skills of a person become under
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in
some
danger.Correct quantifier usage
apply
For example
,while
watching the film about the zombie's invasion on
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of
planet
,people commence being afraid of any individual they meet.Add an article
the planet
In addition
to this
,mentality
of a viewer can be broken,which leads to assistance from the side of the doctors.Just like psychopathic people in hospitals.Almost all of them are under some mental trauma.
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the mentality
However
,some solutions to the given statement can be used.Firstly
,by strictly controlling every viewer by criterias
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criteria
the
age or mental stability,the person can enjoy watching.Correct article usage
apply
Last
but not least,it is better to soften every scene in every film for a better consequences
.Correct the article-noun agreement
better consequences
a better consequence
For example
,when filming horrors,using less dangerous tools is much safer for all who will see it.
In conclusion,no doubt violent scenes
are dramatic to someone's mental stability.However
,changes while
filming can help viewers to get rid of stress.Submitted by bekzodeshonjonovv on
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