Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.

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Dear John, Hope you and your family doing well, I am writing

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to offer you the music event at my sister's wedding which is going to be held at next month's end. Because she asked me to arrange that for her wedding so I have decided to make it a memorable event for her. First of all, I believe you are the right person to do it because of your talent. I am sure you are going to rock it.

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, I feel

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is the right place to showcase your talent as many important guests are going to attend the marriage. As you already know I have less budget for

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program.

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, I can arrange the necessary financial support required for your team to make it a successful event. I am excited about

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as you are going to become famous with

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program. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards Janardhan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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157 words

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