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Teenagers are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a severe problem in their mental and physical health. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Teeners used to waste a lot of
time
 in front of the screens of their
computers
. but, I agree
this
 attitude will affect their mental and physical health badly . Despite ,the importance of
computers
 nowadays for all ages especially teenagers as they used
computers
 during studying.
for example
 ,they need
computers
 for assignments , research and maybe to communicate with their partners and teachers , but teeners may use
computers
 to play video games which may be harmful .
For instance
, the game of blue whale which contains dangerous challenges caused a lot of children to commit suicide .
In addition
 ,spending a long
time
 in front of
computers
 can cause addictions
for instance
 the teener who became addicted to pubg when the internet disconnected , He killed all his family. So, it is so a dangerous issue ,we had to deal with.
furthermore
 , sitting too much
time
 in front of screens will lead to impairment in social skills
due to
 decreasing in real social activity with their friends and family .
Besides
 , uncontrolled screen
time
 affects the ability to concentrate , focus and lack of fitness.
Subsequently
 , parents have to control their computer
time
 and make it under supervision to avoid all the drawbacks of computer excessive
time
 . in conclusion , Despite the importance of
computers
 in their studying and learning but parents have to control screen
time
 and ensure that teeners spend enough
time
 doing exercise and developing their social skills through spending
time
 with them and with their friends .
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