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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

#people #food #exercise
Nowadays,
people
 are encouraging themselves to consume healthy
food
 and to do regular
exercise
. The main factor of
this
 program is to be healthier and avoid obesity. There are several methods to influence other
people
, which I will elaborate more on below.
This
 modern era makes
people
 being busier than in the past.
This
 situation demands them to have a lot of energy;
therefore
, maintaining
an eating
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an eating habit
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habits
 is a must to be able to survive in their work time.
for example
, many employees prefer to bring
food
 from their homes to ensure that they consume healthy
food
.
In addition
, the increase in obesity rate drives
people
 to have more
exercise
. If
this
 habit is continuously done, it would
be
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not only
having
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 a benefit for health but
also
people's
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 body, which could make them more confident
due to
 a slim posture. With regards to the method, In
this
 digital era,
people
 could share their regular
activity-related
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to
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eating
habits
 and regular
exercise
 on their social media platforms,
such
 as Instagram,
Facebook
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and Facebook
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, which could give a wider impact on society.
People
 who want to share the programs could do an education purpose for society regarding how important to implement these
habits
 and there are some risks of avoiding these
habits
 which could lead to
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health
issue
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.
As a result
 of
this
,
people
 would be more consciously aware to follow the program. In conclusion, In
this
 era,
people
 consume more healthy
food
 and do more
exercise
due to
 the workload and being fitter.
Also
, social media platforms are an effective way to influence other
people
.
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