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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

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it is important and necessary for people to make risky decisions in both their
work
 lives and
also
 private lives. to my ,mind the advantages of taking
risks
 throughout our
life
 are more than their disadvantages. in
this
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 I discuss both of these views. First of ,all I believe the
risk
 is divided into two parts, wise
risk
 and stupid
risk
.if we take a bad
risk
 it will set our
life
 in an emergency situation. taking a terrible
risk
 at
work
 , can lead us to bankruptcy and it issue has a horrible effect on our minds, it brings us depression and it is an awful illness. For ,instance my cousin decided to invest in cryptocurrency without any investigation, he spent money in the market.,
unfortunately
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 the Bitcoin price decreased sharply and he lost all of his capital. He got depressed and is taking pills every day. on the other ,hand make a wonderful
risk
 can change your
life
 and shift it into a brilliant situation. taking a
risk
 can develop our situation ,especially in our job
life
. it can cause, us to know more people who can help us or we are able to
work
 with them,
therefore
 our business expands and we may make more money and become rich.
moreover
 taking
risk
 set more than one path in front of us and open many doors for us ، if we didn't take a
risk
 it would not happen for us. more ways you have , the more choices you can. so you can choose the best one and you do not under pressure to choose one path. it cheerful you and bring a deep delight to you. For ,example after my sister graduated from university she could either
work
 for a company with a low salary or set up her business. She took a
risk
 a choose the second way and now she is managing her company and make much money each month .
in addition
 what I really enjoy , having excitement in
life
 which comes with
risks
. having a monotonous
life
 tends to be a nonsense
life
that is
 extremely dangerous and may
finally
 lead to committing suicide. in conclusion,
however
 taking
risks
 in some situations is dangerous, but I personally believe that having an exciting
life
 plus opening many doors in front of us and probably changing your
life
 into an awesome
life
 , the benefits of making
risks
 outweigh its drawbacks.
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