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Evaluate the impact of technology on the modern business landscape.

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There is growing sentiment today related to the importance of
technology
 in running a
business
 in modern society.
Technology
 brings many benefits to
business
 and I will discuss it in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with,
technology
 brings global connections quicker and faster than in the past. Information
technology
 has enabled businesses to attain greater reach. Nowadays,
people
 can work online, get quick communications or run businesses through emails, text, instant messaging, websites, social media platforms, etc. A counter-example is working from home during the Covid-19 pandemic, communication networks allow
people
 to work at home, still have some meetings through video calls or meeting apps
such
 as Zoom, Skype, Teams, etc, and share data and ideas within their department
as well as
 throughout their organisation.
Technology
 brings many new experiences, smart tools, etc with the aim of improving the
business
 environment and making
people
’s life easier.
Technology
 can be seen as a helpful
storage
 for
people
's life. In the past, if
people
 want to save data, they will use the traditional method using paper and save it in
storage
. Nowadays, organisations use cloud
storage
 to supplement their facilities, which is made possible by cloud
storage
. Users can remotely upload and view content, and store and retrieve data as needed.
This
 is a much more convenient way for organizations to access information. Today, there are many information repositories which are designed to be protected from competitors, hackers and others trying to damage the company. So,
technology
 provides us with many helpful and safe
storage
 tools. In conclusion,
technology
 plays an important role in the
business
 field. It creates an international market and makes
people
 closer.
Besides
 that, it
also
 provides us with smart tools to make
people
’s life easier.
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