You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and forgot your watch there. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, •thank him/her for the hospitality • describe your watch and say where you could have left it • suggest a way how to get it back

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are taking good care of yourself.

Firstly

, I would appreciate the way you hosted my stay at your home. I got emotional and was

also

shocked at the same time after the treatment I received from you and your parents. It felt like I am staying with my family.

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, I’d like to inform you that I’ve forgotten my watch in the living room near

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the T.V. It is a black coloured Apple watch with

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blue strap. And it would

also

have a sticker of “you can do it” on it. I am not in town for two weeks.

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, I would request you to please visit

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my uncle’s place and kindly

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the watch to him. He is coming to meet me after 3 days.

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, please know that he stays five blocks away from your place. I am waiting to hear from you soon. Regards, Harsh

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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