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*Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the Internet.

#*newspapers #access #news #internet
Currently, most people head to the latest developments on
this
 earth and leave the old fashion, especially when it related to their life
for instance
 saving money and weast day so, the
Internet
 was the latest good thing on earth
therefore
, I agree with that
Newspapers
 are less important
due to
 there is more than one factor. actually, the
news
 on the
Internet
 has a lot and wide topics for the reader and the easy way to read, the reader can choose a topic in which they are interested in it
for example
 if readers need to read about sports they just search and read
as a result
 they don't need to read all of the
news
 on the
Internet
also
, that takes a few minutes at home or office
Moreover
, the
News
 on the
Internet
 makes they have the
last
news
 in the world and write the expression,
for instance
, listening to the
last
news
 via social media
such
 as Facebook or Twitter and sharing their opinion by writing a comment.
In addition
, the
news
 on the
Internet
 is free fees to all readers which means they haven't to buy the newspaper every day
also
, reading the
news
 by using the
Internet
 makes saving the environment
for instance
 reducing the cut-off trees to make
newspapers
 leading to reducing pollution. In conclusion, I believe that the
news
 on the
Internet
 is more helpful than
Newspapers
 in saving money and the environment
also
, they can express and share their comment
therefore
, I believe that
Newspapers
 are limited in topics and expensive so, my advice for the readers use the
Internet
 to read the
last
news
 and saving the environment
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