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*Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the Internet.

#*newspapers #access #news #internet
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Currently, most people head to the latest developments on
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 earth and leave the old fashion, especially when it related to their life
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 saving money and weast day so, the
Internet
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 was the latest good thing on earth
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, I agree with that
Newspapers
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 are less important
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 there is more than one factor. actually, the
news
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 on the
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 has a lot and wide topics for the reader and the easy way to read, the reader can choose a topic in which they are interested in it
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 if readers need to read about sports they just search and read
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 they don't need to read all of the
news
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 on the
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also
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, that takes a few minutes at home or office
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, the
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 on the
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 makes they have the
last
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news
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 in the world and write the expression,
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, listening to the
last
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news
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 via social media
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 as Facebook or Twitter and sharing their opinion by writing a comment.
In addition
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, the
news
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 on the
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 is free fees to all readers which means they haven't to buy the newspaper every day
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, reading the
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 by using the
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 makes saving the environment
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 reducing the cut-off trees to make
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 leading to reducing pollution. In conclusion, I believe that the
news
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 on the
Internet
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 is more helpful than
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 in saving money and the environment
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, they can express and share their comment
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, I believe that
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 are limited in topics and expensive so, my advice for the readers use the
Internet
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 to read the
last
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news
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 and saving the environment
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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