Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at schools while others think it is a waste of time. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.
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subject
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subjects
on
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of
it's
significance in the Replace the word
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school
. Considering different perspectives, some might say that art
play
a crucial role Change the verb form
plays
whereas
some might say art
is not important to a
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child
education.
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art
is a subject
where student
can express themselves by conveying the meaning behind each piece of artwork through their interpretation and illustration of it. Some support the idea that Fix the agreement mistake
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is an essential Correct your spelling
art
subject
at school
due to
how it acts as a
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relieve
mechanism for Replace the word
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students
to portrays
themself. Considering the fact that some people are born with more artistic capabilities than other, Wrong verb form
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art
provide
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provides
students
to further
express themself through art
. Furthermore
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allow
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student
to showcase themselves through their artistic Add an article
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mindset
, creating an opportunity for students
to show empathy for eachother
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each other
as well as
demonstrating
their capability to perform Wrong verb form
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art
. Moreover
, because of the creativity needed, art
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develops
children
ability in aspects of critical thinking, Change noun form
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expression
through varied forms of Correct word choice
and expression
art
. In addition
, many individuals still sucess
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success
art
, therefore
, art
should still be consider
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be considered
as
a significant Change preposition
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subject
in school
to give students
more options on what pathways they are intrested
in.
Regardless of that, some might say Correct your spelling
interested
art
is not needed in school
as it is a waste of time
due to
less requirement on
the need for logical thinking. Change preposition
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This
is supported by the fact that art
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, therefore,
therefore
lower the need of using logical
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a logical
mindset
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opposed
such
as mathematics or science. Art
can be a waste of time
because to achive
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achieve
a
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high quality
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high-quality
art
with thoughtful meaning. student
must spend a huge amount of their Fix the agreement mistake
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time
and effort to
finishing the artwork. Change preposition
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This
led to unwise usage of time
and management issues, distracting students
from other subjects. Upon these factors, art
can be a waste of time
as it fail
to develop an individual logical Change the verb form
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mindset
and also
take away a large portion of a student
's precious time
to complete.
In my opinion, art
play
an important role Change the verb form
plays
to
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for
students
in school
because it allows them to express their creativity through their performance. Creativity can be consider
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be considered
as
one of the biggest assets for some individual Change preposition
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therefore
, having art
as a subject
in school
allow students
to effectively portrays
themselves through the illustration of their piece. Change the verb form
portray
Nevertheless
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and lack of logical reasonings
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reasoning
in
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of
mindset
are
equally important to an individual Change the verb form
is
therefore
art
should be considered as
an essential Change preposition
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subject
in school
. It is up to one's choice to decide on their wise usage of time
, and so, spending time
to finish and
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