Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they go on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
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people choose to go Correct article usage
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to
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and helpful for employees, but at the same time Correct your spelling
relaxable
that
creates danger for Correct pronoun usage
they
their
. There are some positive influences but Correct pronoun usage
them
also
have drawbacks so, the essay will discuss negative tendencies below.
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over
the world. Change preposition
in
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, these actions have problems for tourists and their Linking Words
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families
stranger
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a journey
journey
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danger
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a danger
the danger
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a
plane, Correct article usage
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a
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tram are potential warmings for Correct article usage
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the article
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death
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however
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inhabitats
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inhabitants
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their
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overseas
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the overseas
an overseas
country
, Fix the agreement mistake
countries
specially
famous cities.
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especially
although
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the
vacations have some unwanted sites, Correct article usage
apply
but
give pleasure feeling to men and women. In the other words, the world Remove the conjunction
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has the
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change
our
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of our
lifes
.Correct your spelling
lives
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