Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they go on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

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people choose to go

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abroad with family for work and other things.

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relaxable

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. There are some positive influences but

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the world.

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bag, wallet and credit card.

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bus,

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plane,

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ship and

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tram are potential warmings for

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journal

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describes

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traffic accidents on the road. Every year thousands of people

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the most of people are

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inhabitants

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hundreds of traveller end of life from

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causing.

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, humans tend to visit

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country

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famous cities. In conclusion, I would maintain that,

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vacations have some unwanted sites,

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give pleasure feeling to men and women. In the other words, the world

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biggest

chance

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our

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lifes

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lives

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