Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why it is not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

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It is apparent that riding
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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, which is supposed to be the most habitually congenial amongst
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mean
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men
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,
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becoming a controversial topic.
This
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essay will discuss reasons why people
are not prefer
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do not prefer
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traveling
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to travel
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by bike and some measures will be recommended to improve
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situation.
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with, the two significant excuses are the inconvenience and the unsafety of driving
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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. Perhaps the major cause why residents rather use other
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to travel is that it takes extremely much time and energy.
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, the average speed of cycling is ten
kilometers
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per
an
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apply
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hour, which is quite slow compared to driving
car
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a car
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or
motobike
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motorbike
, and the driver spends at least one hundred calories for four
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riding.
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,
bicycle
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users
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are
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seriously vulnerable when using the same road
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as
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other transports. When
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cyclists
have
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intend
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intended
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to take a turn without carelessness, they are easily conflicted. Some possible solutions which can
carried
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be carried
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out to mitigate these drawbacks and motivate
inhabitats
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inhabitants
to use bikes are constructing facilities
priorizing
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prioritizing
for bikers and encouraging civilians to buy accessories for bike
traveler
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travelers
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.
Firstly
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, officials should lay out
lay out
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plans which
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correlated with bridge construction, biker-prioritized lanes and underground roads, it may help to lower the volume of transport on the road at the same time. As a
rusult
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result
, the number of accidents may be reduced.
Besides
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, States can spread information
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on
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the
neccessary
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necessary
of
enviromental
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environmental
protection
by
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through
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public media which can raise awareness
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of
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the negative impacts of fuel or fossil
comsuming
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consuming
vehicles.
Consequently
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, there is likely several positive
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in people's perspective on
traveling
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travelling
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by
bicycle
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instead
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of car or
motobike
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motorbike
. In conclusion, despite
bike’s
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bikes’
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positive impact on the environment, it is still not uncommon in many places recently.
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However
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it can still be changed thank
to
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the government’s actions.
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