Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.

Many
countries
nowadays are faced with
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cultural exchange and conflict. Some people may argue that foreign movies and TV program is beneficial, Others,
however
, claim that local movies and TV programs
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needed and more important. In my view, I think
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a local movie industry is a reasonable choice. There is a reasonable topic that
this
can reduce the unemployment rate.
As making
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films are a huge business and is famous for its complex work, which
need
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human beings in different fields to cooperate with each other.
For example
, in many films, directors need not only actors
,
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but
also
workers who set up the scene and post-production special effects workers.
This
may result in more
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provided
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in different zones, promote employment,
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about economic prosperity. It is true that there are some positive sides in introduce movies because
this
can let local residents
to
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know different
history
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and
culture
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cultures
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and build a closer relationship with the public in other nations.
However
, it is undoubted that the demerits it brings can dwarf the
meris
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merits
. To be more specific, a movie often contains
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and social
atmosphere
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in other
countries
in the plot or character
behavior
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. When the locals blindly watch films
of
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other
countries
, their angles of thinking will be affected and lose the sense of identity of
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culture.
Moreover
, the situation will become even worse if there is no one
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in
the
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traditional knowledge, and the block will become just the same as other
countries
, which led to a loss of the sense of belonging to their country. In conclusion, I think having own film and television business is important for a country, as typical culture and economic growth
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much more important than any other things.
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