Some people think tourism should be banned while some disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
After transportation became easier and more convenient,
people
started travelling around the globe more. Due to
that ,incident tourism
and hospitality business has been promoted throughout the decades. However
, some people
still find that tourism
should be banned especially after the pandemic in 2020, whereas
another group of people
disagree with that idea.
To begin
with, there're two main reasons why people
agree that tourism
should be banned which are crime fear and disease problems. In any country
that tends to be a highly recommended tourist destination, some local people
feel unsafe about millions of foreigners entering the country
daily. There is a possibility that terrorists can be disguised as a tourist as well. For instance
, terrorists got into many Europe countries and mass murdered innocent people
. In addition
, in the post-pandemic ,society people
are more aware of how diseases can spread all over the world by tourism
mainly the diseases that are easy to be infected such
as Covid-19, flu, pox and many more. Hence
, people
are more concerned about the dangers tourists can bring .
On the other hand
, some people
still support tourism
to continue due to
the national economic boost and pride in their cultures. With a high inflow of tourists
the Add a comma
,tourists
country
's economy will surely be better: with more income for local businesses. Some touristy countries' economies rely on the tourism
sector, so some people
certainly don't want tourism
to stop. Apart from the financial reason, people
are also
proud of their culture being visible to the worldwide community. The more tourist comes into the country
the more famous their culture will be. Therefore
, people
still want tourism
to be carried on.
In conclusion, Both sides have reasons to support their idea. In my opinion, I find more benefits for every party if tourism
is not banned. Although
, there are so many more valid points for the former group to against tourism
. I still find that the possible advantages the country
will be able to gain is more than the possibility of the risks to be concerned about. So, tourism
should not be banned.Submitted by bamchaya1234 on
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