Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

The increased number of obese

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in society is concerning, and that lead to some people to believe that the

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is accountable for

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, I would argue that it is not the

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to blame nor the

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, since they do not have

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over their

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at school or the food they eat.

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, some would argue that the

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of obesity is the

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's responsibility. I believe that the

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is not to be at fault, but rather provides aid to

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the debilitating issues. By providing mass awareness, and educating

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and

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about its bad contributions to human health, like diabetes, hypertensive and other illnesses.

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emphasizes the importance of the

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towards the prevention and

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of weight gain in

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.

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, even though

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are responsible for their

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's diet, they are not solely accountable for its growth in size.

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, as we know it, will always look after their

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's welfare and often served healthy food at their table.

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youngster has no

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over their diet they eat what they can eat as it pleases them, especially in school,

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. The absence of

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' presence and peer pressure often leads to the unnecessary consumption of unhealthy snacks that cause obesity. In conclusion, I firmly disagree since the

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has no direct responsibility for the rise of overweight

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,

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could not be blamed solely either , as they were not at their young at all times.

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, the

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can help by providing a mass awareness campaign showing the negative effect of obesity in

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through education in combined efforts with the

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and school teachers.