The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The provided table and pie charts illustrate the funding of
police
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the police
budget
in Britain for 2017 and 2018 (in million pounds). The table provides the funding sources
of money came from and the pie charts provide the way to disribute
of funding Correct your spelling
distribute
source
.
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sources
Overall
, it is clear that
the funding of police
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the police
budget
came from in 2018 (National Goverment
, Local Taxes, Other Correct your spelling
government
Sources
) was increased compared to 2017, and it was allocated for three main expenditure
(Salaries, Technology, Buildings and Transport).
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expenditures
To begin
with, at
2017 total of funding Change preposition
in
sources
police
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the police
budget
was 304.7m that it
was increased by Correct pronoun usage
which
government
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the government
at
2018 Change preposition
apply
in to
318.6m. Join the words
into
National
government was the main Add an article
The national
sources
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source
fund
what can support Change preposition
of fund
police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 with nominal 175.5m and 177.8m, while
the second rank of fund sources
for police
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the police
budget
was local taxes in count 91.2m and 102.3m, and the last
fund of police
budget
was other sources
(eg grants) (38m and 38.5m).
Following
this
, the data on the pie charts show in 2018 and 2017 any
some different Correct your spelling
and
distribution
of Fix the agreement mistake
distributions
police
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the police
budget
, except on
buildings and transport which stay Change preposition
for
on
17% of Change preposition
at
total
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the total
police
budget
. In 2018 the highest allocation of police
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the police
budget
still on salaries, but it was declined slightly around 6% became 69% than
2017 75%. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, police
start aware with
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of
advancement
of technology in 2018 which it make affected the allocation of technology was increased in 2018, Add an article
the advancement
start
from 8% to 14%.Change the form of the verb
starting
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