The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The provided table and pie charts illustrate the funding of
police
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the police
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budget
in Britain for 2017 and 2018 (in million pounds). The table provides the funding
sources
of money came from and the pie charts provide the way to
disribute
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distribute
of funding
source
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sources
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the funding of
police
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the police
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budget
came from in 2018 (National
Goverment
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government
, Local Taxes, Other
Sources
) was increased compared to 2017, and it was allocated for three main
expenditure
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expenditures
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(Salaries, Technology, Buildings and Transport).
To begin
with,
at
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2017 total of funding
sources
police
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the police
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budget
was 304.7m that
it
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which
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was increased by
government
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the government
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at
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2018
in to
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318.6m.
National
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The national
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government was the main
sources
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source
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fund
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what can support
police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 with nominal 175.5m and 177.8m,
while
the second rank of fund
sources
for
police
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the police
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budget
was local taxes in count 91.2m and 102.3m, and the
last
fund of
police
budget
was other
sources
(eg grants) (38m and 38.5m).
Following
this
, the data on the pie charts show in 2018 and 2017
any
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and
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some different
distribution
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distributions
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of
police
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the police
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budget
, except
on
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buildings and transport which stay
on
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at
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17% of
total
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the total
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police
budget
. In 2018 the highest allocation of
police
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the police
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budget
still on salaries, but it was declined slightly around 6% became 69%
than
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in
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2017 75%.
Furthermore
,
police
start aware
with
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of
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advancement
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the advancement
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of technology in 2018 which it make affected the allocation of technology was increased in 2018,
start
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starting
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from 8% to 14%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, sources, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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