You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir, I am a resident of block b of Vasant Kunj and I am writing to regarding the information of the proposed shopping centre near our residence. It was just a week before that the president of our Resident Welfare associations uprise us with

this

information

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You will be glad to know that all of us are very excited to know more about the

mall

and

hence

this

letter is for. As you know, modernisation has introduced us to the concept of malls and in

this

era, it has become a need for urban people. The shopping centre has been very convenient for us because we get everything regarding our needs and even leisure under one roof.

This

such

a blessing for the working population and it is

such

a privilege to have one in our neighbourhood.

However

, it would be beneficial for you

also

if we give our feedback pertaining to the demands of the public. I am assuming that the

mall

will have all the necessary services like cinema halls, supermart and other brand stores. I suggest that the

mall

should

also

have some pocket-friendly brands like Westside, lifestyle and Max,which are affordable for most of us. I would

also

like to know about the parking facility provided there as it should not create traffic congestion over there. I hope that

this

mall

is a profitable venture for you and a piece of blessing for all of us.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

242 words

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