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The charts bellow give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The charts bellow give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
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The charts represent information about travel to and from the
UK
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, and about the most popular
countries
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 for
UK
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residents
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 to visit. On the first chart, the vertical axe shows the number of
visitors
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 to and from the
UK
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.
In addition
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, the horizontal axe depicts the years. It is being seen how the number of
visitors
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 to and from the
UK
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 fluctuated from 1979 to 1999. In 1979, of them, the number of
UK
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visitors
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 and foreign travellers was nearly 11
million
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. From that year, the trend went steadily upward, but between 1984 and 1989 there was a significant modification, visits abroad by
UK
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residents
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 rocketed up and reach their peak in 1999 with approximately 50
million
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visitors
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,
while
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 visits to the
UK
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 by overseas
residents
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 increased gradually and obtain its top in 1999 with nearly 30
million
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visitors
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. The second bar chart portrays data about the most popular
countries
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 visited by
UK
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residents
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 in 1999. For the
UK
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 inhabitants Turkey was less attractive, with almost 2
million
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visitors
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, so on were Greece and USA, with roughly 3 and 4
million
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.
However
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, Spain and France were the most popular
countries
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 to visit,with 9 and nearly 10
million
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. It is worth mentioning that in 1999 France was the leader in the statistics of the most popular
countries
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 visited by
UK
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residents
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, countries, residents, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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