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Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. How far do you agree ar disagree with the above opinion?

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Nowadays, most
companies
 looking for employers are
moreover
 graduating from
universities
 and being able to
work
 immediately after hiring for their jobs. Some people believe that
universities
 must provide the situation that students before graduating have to
work
 as an intern in some firms. Personally, I completely agree with
this
 idea and in
this
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 I will explain my opinion with some examples.
Firstly
, one of the main reasons why I agree with
this
 vision is that when you want to apply for
work
 in each major, before everything you need to have some
skills
 about
this
 job, so we can see
this
 objective has the most effective role in your profession.
Although
, in
many
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part
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 of the world,
companies
 often have some programmes for their new stuff, I think in the near future they can not handle
this
 situation.
Secondly
,
this
 year's efficiency and effectiveness for firms are so important than before, so the workers or staff with more knowledge and positive backgrounds which come from an internship really could be helpful,
however
 for learning
this
experience
 some other company needs to consider some money and energy.
In addition
 by working
experience
,
companies
 better can understand and know about of behaviours the new staff in the
work place
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. For ,example people who have an experiment to
work
 in a difficult situation knowing that
they
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 to
work
 in some situations, over some graduated students that working directly without any
experience
 in some
companies
, got that the job is not the subject that they wanted, so if they had a chance to
work
 as an intern maybe they know
this
 more soon.
On the other hand
, some people believe that if students do not provide
skills
 in
universities
 they could take
experience
 independently and its
help
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 them to grow up their
skills
 better than others. In conclusion, in my
view
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universities
 are the first step in industries in every part of the world and if they provide the student with more
skills
 they could push
companies
 more and more to go forward and as
a
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ofresult
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result
 a better quality of life for all of us.
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