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the maps below show the indusrial area in the twon of Norbition and planned future development of the sight,summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mai featres and make copmrison where relevant

the maps below show the indusrial area in the twon of Norbition and planned future development of the sight,summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mai featres and make copmrison where relevant
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The maps depict the current Norbition industrial
area
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 which is planned to be converted
to
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into
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 a residential
area
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.
According to
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 the planned future development, all factories will be either demolished or converted
to
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into
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 other buildings. There is
also
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 a plan for expansion including a new
round about
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roundabout
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 on the main
road
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. Plus, a new
road
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 is planned to be built which bring the
area
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 closer to the town and makes
construction
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the construction
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 of new housing possible. Another significant change is a new
road
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 which includes a bridge over the river to expand the
area
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 and open more space for housing near
to
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apply
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the current
round about
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roundabout
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 and on the other side of the river.
This
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also
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 requires farmland to be moved
to
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further
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 east. Other changes are new facilities for the habitants. These
ranging
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 from a school, a playground, and a medical
center
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centre
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 to shops which all are built near
to
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the current
road
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 except shops which
is
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are
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 going to be located on the west side of the current
round about
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roundabout
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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