the maps below show the indusrial area in the twon of Norbition and planned future development of the sight,summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mai featres and make copmrison where relevant

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The maps depict the current Norbition industrial

area

which is planned to be converted

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a residential

area

According to

the planned future development, all factories will be either demolished or converted

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into

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other buildings. There is

also

a plan for expansion including a new

round about

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roundabout

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on the main

road

. Plus, a new

road

is planned to be built which bring the

area

closer to the town and makes

construction

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the construction

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of new housing possible. Another significant change is a new

road

which includes a bridge over the river to expand the

area

and open more space for housing near

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apply

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the current

round about

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roundabout

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and on the other side of the river.

This

also

requires farmland to be moved

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further

east. Other changes are new facilities for the habitants. These

ranging

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from a school, a playground, and a medical

center

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to shops which all are built near

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the current

road

except shops which

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are

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going to be located on the west side of the current

round about

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roundabout

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the maps below show the indusrial area in the twon of Norbition and planned future development of the sight,summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mai featres and make copmrison where relevant

In many nations , only a minority of young people are willing to do unpaid community service . There are many arguments that shows many negative outcomes because of this problem and the best solution are in demand .

Today more people are overweight than ever before . What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?