When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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people
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that intended
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moderately
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convenient
To begin
with, It's cannot be denied that building appearance might have some significiant
advantages. Correct your spelling
significant
Firstly
, many country authoroties
built many Correct your spelling
authorities
marvelous
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marvellous
buildings
to increase tourism. many tourists are showing interest to visit historical as well as
modern buildings
. For example
, Dubai
government built many attractive Correct article usage
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Secondly
, if buildings
like shopping malls are unique, more people's
are attracted by their places which increases their profits. Change noun form
people
for instance
, in Chennai " forum mall" attracts more people
because of their
structure.
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, they only focus on their purposes. For example
, the exteriors of industrial warehouses are usually covered by a layer of cement or even bricks. Most of
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public
and official Add an article
the public
buildings
are constructed for special purposes. To illustrate, hospital structures are designed based on regulations which assure their resistance against extreme natural disasters such
as earthquakes and floods; as a result
, more strict regulations should be considered in their structural design process ― their appearance is not their architectural priority.
In conclusion, the outward views of some buildings
are a simple architectural element, because in certain cases conceptual appearances have been designed to attract people
, symbolize a country, or transfer an idea, whereas
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some other Add the comma(s)
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buildings
, the designers focus on structural factors rather than their exterior appearances ― for the sake of building’s intended usage.Submitted by madhavansubase on
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