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Explain the manufacturing process of the brick referring the diagram

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The Diagram explains the manufacturing
process
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 of the
bricks
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 which is used for construction. There are seven processes that
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 in
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 manufacturing
process
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finally
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 culminating and packaged for delivery. The entire
process
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 is initiated by using a digger to excavate the clay which is
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 filtered using a metal grid and
then
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 a roller. The filtered clay is
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 used mixed with
sad
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sand
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 and water and put into
molders
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moulders
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 to
mold
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mould
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 the
bricks
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 and
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 put into
drying
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 oven and they are cooled as per the required temperature in cooling chambers. The final
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 after cooling is
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packaging the
bricks
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 and
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 delivered to the consumers. During the entire
process
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 of manufacturing
bricks
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,
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drying and
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cooling is the most crucial part of
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brick making.
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