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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a common thought that reading
books
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 is a more convenient way to develop more imagination and language skills than watching TV. I partly agree with
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 opinion. I believe that we can develop our imagination by reading
books
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 much better. We don’t have the exact appearance of characters or objects
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 we are reading
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 and it leads us to picture them in our minds. When it comes to improving language skills, from my point of view, watching and listening to something on TV is the better way than reading
books
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. People are more likely to memorize what they see and hear. In conclusion, both of them are convenient depending on your goal. Reading
books
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 is better to push your imagination and watching TV is the better way to improve language skills.
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