A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: -apologies for it -explain what you are doing on that date -suggest to him/her an alternate time to come.

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Hello Ekta, I am really excited to hear that you will
planning
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to come
at
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my home and going to stay with me next month. But, I wanted to let you know that I will not available in next first week of the month.
Firstly
, I would like to say sorry for
this
inconvenience from my side. I had made
this
plan before we met on Whatsapp
last
.
Secondly
, During that time I will go out of
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stations
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for
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work. I am going to present my work to my customer and going to discuss a new project.
This
plan has
arranged
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suddenly
due to
our customer will not
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avaliable
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available
in
next
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the next
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six
month
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as he will going to China.
Thirdly
, I would
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suggest to
come
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after my meeting's week.
Moreover
, I am
also
planning to leave from office on that days.
Hence
, we will have time to enjoy
and
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have time to go outside the place which
you
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have not seen yet. I am sorry for all the trouble I caused. I'm looking forward to seeing you. Warmest regards,
Milav
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Milan
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