A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: -apologies for it -explain what you are doing on that date -suggest to him/her an alternate time to come.

#friend #plans #visit #place #date #-apologies #-explain #-suggest #time

Hello Ekta, I am really excited to hear that you will

planning

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to come

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my home and going to stay with me next month. But, I wanted to let you know that I will not available in next first week of the month.

Firstly

, I would like to say sorry for

this

inconvenience from my side. I had made

this

plan before we met on Whatsapp

last

Secondly

, During that time I will go out of

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stations

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for

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work. I am going to present my work to my customer and going to discuss a new project.

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plan has

arranged

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suddenly

due to

our customer will not

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avaliable

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available

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the next

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six

month

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as he will going to China.

Thirdly

, I would

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tolike

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suggest to

come

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after my meeting's week.

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, I am

also

planning to leave from office on that days.

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, we will have time to enjoy

and

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ourselves and

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have time to go outside the place which

you

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have not seen yet. I am sorry for all the trouble I caused. I'm looking forward to seeing you. Warmest regards,

Milav

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Milan

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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