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The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
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This
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 line graph depicts information regarding the
crime
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 in Manchester city in three different categories
burglary
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,
car
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theft
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 and
robbery
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 between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
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 , It can be seen that
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 the area of
car
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theft
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 and
robbery
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 shows a gradual increase and decrease over the
period
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 but the
theft
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 of cars outraced the
burglary
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 at some point.In comparison, the
burglary
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crime
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 rate
initially
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 was very high and experienced a gradual decrease
at the end
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 of the
period
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. The city had more risk of illegal entry of a building with the intent to commit a
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 at the beginning of the
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 about 3500
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 it had slight growth of 250 in 2004.After that, the rate of
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 fell to 3000 and it showed a steady decline of around 250 – 500 each year
then
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 it reached the
value
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 of 1000 in 2008.It remained a constant
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 after very small fluctuations during the term 2009-2012 were close to the
value
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 of 1500.
Robbery
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 and
Car
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theft
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was
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were
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 at 500 and 2400 respectively at the start of the
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whereas
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it
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 showed a small fluctuation over the
period
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. The city should be very careful with
Car
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 robbing because it becomes high which outraced the rate of
burglary
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 in 2000 and achieved a
value
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 of less than 3000 in 2012.
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, the
robbery
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 was very low comparatively and it doesn’t reach more than 1000 in the entire
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, burglary, car, theft, robbery, period, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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