The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

This

line graph depicts information regarding the

crime

in Manchester city in three different categories

burglary

,

car

theft

and

robbery

between 2003 and 2012.

Overall

, It can be seen that

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the area of

car

theft

and

robbery

shows a gradual increase and decrease over the

period

but the

theft

of cars outraced the

burglary

at some point.In comparison, the

burglary

crime

rate

initially

was very high and experienced a gradual decrease

at the end

of the

period

. The city had more risk of illegal entry of a building with the intent to commit a

crime

at the beginning of the

period

about 3500

then

it had slight growth of 250 in 2004.After that, the rate of

crime

fell to 3000 and it showed a steady decline of around 250 – 500 each year

then

it reached the

value

of 1000 in 2008.It remained a constant

value

after very small fluctuations during the term 2009-2012 were close to the

value

of 1500.

Robbery

and

Car

theft

was

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at 500 and 2400 respectively at the start of the

period

whereas

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showed a small fluctuation over the

period

. The city should be very careful with

Car

robbing because it becomes high which outraced the rate of

burglary

in 2000 and achieved a

value

of less than 3000 in 2012.

However

, the

robbery

was very low comparatively and it doesn’t reach more than 1000 in the entire

period

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