Task 1 - Me: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie

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displays the average energy consumption of one house in Australia,

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the second

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illustrates the greenhouse

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emitted from

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power utilisation.

Overall

, the majority of energy is used for heating and

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heating, but the key factors causing greenhouse

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emissions are

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heating and other appliances over the period surveyed. In the first

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, heating consumes the most power, contributing 42%, compared to the second rank of

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heating with 30%. The percentage of energy utilisation for other electronics is recorded at 15%, the third highest among

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all needs. The

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parts are used for lighting and cooling, at 4% and 2% respectively. Regarding

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chart

, the percentage of

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emissions coming from

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heating and other appliances

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reported at around 30% for each, the highest figure

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influences.

Similarly

, lower ranks are the figures for heating and fridge, contributing every 15%. The rest amount of

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emissions

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lighting and cooling uses are under 10%.