Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Since technology has become a crucial part of
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youngests
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their time on
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technology even from their early childhood. Some
people
believe using devices for a long time brings health distributions to a child,
whereas
others tend to think that the earlier child is involved
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new developments-the more knowledge
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will receive.
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essay shall delve into both views and give an exact conclusion. First of all, our world is, today, becoming more and more complex, and the impact of developments increases from day to day. In order to adapt to
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alterations, some parents introduce their children to the devices and modern life. It is
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undoubtedly
that if the children
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well prepared
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the danger and downward effects on their health, there will be only benefits that children will take with their fresh head.
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UK researchers
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revealed that young
people
are likely to get the information more
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than the
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oldest
.
Consequently
, early
familirized
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familiarized
to internet
people
will be more acknowledged as
succesful
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successful
person in their future lives.
On the other hand
, it cannot be denied that computers and phones have
a very undermining effects
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on their healthiness caused by overuse or wrong way of use. It can bring either
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with mental health or
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physical issues depending,
for instance
, on the content watched or time spent on, relatively.
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Australian studies show that about 70% of young
people
now
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stress, depression and several body disorders,
such
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back, weak vision and others. Studies say that conscious problems
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related
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videogames
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, which are in general stressful and attention-required,
as well as
body illnesses either. In conclusion, taking both points of view, it can be obvious that there is a
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of problems in using the internet from
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early age, and
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do not
outweight
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outweigh
disadvantages
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.
Instead
of using devices, parents should encourage their kids to read books, play
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or just be in
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society. I can surely say that it will have more
pleasent
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pleasant
effects on the offspring.
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