People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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the government should not

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its citizen and allow them to keep their earnings. I strongly disagree with

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opinion because

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contribute to public comfort and provide support for the poor. First and foremost,

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play a vital role in ensuring public comfort by funding essential infrastructures and services.

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collected by the government are used to build and maintain infrastructure

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as roads, bridges, and public transportation, which improve the daily lives of

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.

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, tax revenue funds the construction of schools and hospitals, ensuring access to education and healthcare for everyone. Without sufficient

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, governments would struggle to provide these essential services, which could lead to a decline in public welfare.

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, not all people in certain countries are wealthy or have sufficient income. Many countries, especially developing ones, still face significant welfare gaps.

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, a survey

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conducted in Indonesia shows that 57% of its population lives in extreme poverty,

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in metropolitan areas, many wealthy individuals live in

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. If the authorities were to exempt these rich people from paying

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, those without privileges would struggle even more to meet their basic needs, let alone achieve their dreams.

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highlights the necessity of imposing

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on certain groups to contribute to improving the well-being of others. In conclusion, people should pay

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to the state from their earnings for the betterment of the economy and the

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welfare of society.

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, the authorities should wisely manage tax revenues to ensure that citizen

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confident and willing to involve a portion of their income to the nation.