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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they release from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

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It is true that many
criminals
 commit crimes again after discharging from jail and there could be some reasons behind
this
 matter. But
this
 problem could be addressed in some possible ways. I will explain my ideas regarding the given notion with suitable examples and a conclusion in the subsequent paragraphs.  To strengthen my point of view, unemployment is
also
 a reason because when offenders come out from prison and they start to look for work but companies reject them because of their criminal history owing to
this
 fact, they need money to survive in
this
 world
as a result
, they engage with other
criminals
 so that they can get capital to accomplish their desires.
Moreover
, sometimes
criminals
 do not care about their families and themselves when they are sent to jail
then
 they feel very alone and their mind is not fully developed and they do not think about the negative effects
consequently
, they commit a crime because of their mindset. To cite an example, sometimes the authorities do not make strict regulations for them that's why they commit offences again and again because they know that after spending some days, they will come outside the jail. 
On the other hand
, there could be some possible ways to reduce crime.
Firstly
, organizations must give them a chance to
criminals
 for work so that they can keep themselves busy and their minds will not divert from other criminal activities because they will spend their whole day or night in their jobs
as a result
,
criminals
 will be busy making money.
Secondly
, the authorities must arrange psychologists for
criminals
 as it will help them to consult with them if they get any criminal actions in their minds so they can reduce them and they will find a way to involve themselves in other activities.  To recapitulate, above mentioned ideas could be helpful for
criminals
 to reduce crime and societies can become safer for everyone.
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