With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

It is no longer a surprise that most animal varieties have lost their homes and some are endangered of their
lives
.
This
is
due to
the cutting down of trees, urban development, and the unauthorized killing of
animals
.
While
the aforementioned factors are important for national development, I opine that there is a need to safeguard
animals
'
lives
as
this
will improve our horizon about nature.
This
essay will highlight how animal
lives
could be protected.
To begin
with, In order to protect the animal ecosystem and their
lives
, there is a need for government to set up a policy against illegal hunting or unauthorized deforestation.
This
simply means introducing some punitive measures against
such
acts. An example is the "Land Use Act" introduced by the Nigerian government to punish those who engage in the illegal killing of
animals
or cutting down of trees. Individuals are warned through various means
such
as TV programs, social media
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platforms
, and national dailies on the consequence of breaching laid out rules.
Furthermore
, there is a need to sensitise people against
such
activities which could be detrimental to animal
lives
.
This
implies, giving
orientation
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on the effects our activities could have on
animals
. An example is a popular TV program called "Nat Geo Wild" which educates people on the importance of different animal species and how they can be protected.
Such
programs, help people to appreciate nature, thereby improving their horizons. In conclusion, considering all human activities which have endangered animal
ecosystem
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ecosystems
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as well as
their
lives
, It is vital to guide
animal
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animals
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natural
habitat
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habitats
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,
hence
, their
lives
.
This
can be accomplished through appropriate governmental policy and sensitization programs.
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