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wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.Do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that developed
nations
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 should help developing
countries
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 provide humanitarian relief in emergency situations.I endorse the statement and the reasons for the same would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,there are many reasons for agreement.First and foremost,the developed
nations
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 help to fulfil the basic needs of the daily routine.They can help them to get food with proper nutrients,pure drinking water and so on.To cite an example,a survey made a few years ago that America,Australia and India, are the most wealthy
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 among the other
countries
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.The financial position of the country is well organised and properly maintained by the government so they can help the poorer
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 to get relief during any natural calamity
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 as earthquakes, floods and so on.
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, rich
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 provide medical facilities to people in less developed
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 during an emergency situation.
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,their health is maintained and a number of diseases are not spread.
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,another factor worth mentioning is that number of developed
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 helps other
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 to develop their
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 by providing different resources.They can
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 give loans to the poorer
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 to make their provincial develop.
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,England is one of the most developed
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 and all types of facilities are available there so they can help the neighbour country to get relief from the natural calamity on humanitarian grounds.
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, wealthy
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 can make their image strong
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 improve their relationship with other regions by helping them in their difficult time.
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 makes the transport of goods and services more flexible as compared to the past.They do not charge the tax
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 importing the goods.
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,I deem that well develop kingdoms always try to support the less improved
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 during the emergency situation.
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,they can make their image positive by helping the poorer
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 and
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 improving their relationships with other
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.They can provide medical facilities when there is a calamity.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Humanitarian relief
  • Infrastructure
  • Global solidarity
  • Disproportionately
  • External assistance
  • Rebuilding efforts
  • Disaster response
  • Investment in stability
  • Dependency theory
  • Responsible intervention
  • Paternalistic
  • Shared humanity
  • Sovereignty
  • Capabilities
  • Fatality rates
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