The Internet is becoming a dominant element in modern life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

In today's world, where everything is connected via the
internet
, it would be safe to say that, it is a big part of our
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and humans are largely dependent on it. There are numerous advantages of the
internet
, but at the same
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it does
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it's
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share of disadvantages. In
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we will see them and
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up with a reason conclusion.
Firstly
, the net has made life easier and
comfortable
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for
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society. With the help of it, people can study online, do shopping
as well as
in some
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even work from
home
instead
of going to office school or
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. For instance, when
covid
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COVID-19
hit in 2019, it affected everyone in a big way, because of it people were getting sick and many were dying,
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a result public
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at
home
.
However
,
this
didn’t stop our daily life from moving forward, because of the web we could work from
home
, children were able to continue their education from
home
and the public could do shopping without even going out to the store.
Nevertheless
, despite having all these positive effects on humans, there is
also
some negative side of the net. Since everything is now connected via the
internet
and
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of our personal information
such
as bank details are there, which makes it a target for cyber
attack
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.
Everyday
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cyber crime is growing and everyone is been a victim of it.
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, it has been found that there has been a 65% rise in cyber
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in the past five years and many companies and individuals have lost money or been a casualty of identity theft. In conclusion, it can be said that, without the help of the
internet
, much of our daily life's work wouldn't be as smooth as it would be, but at the same time it is hard to ignore the negative aspects of it as well.
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